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THE GUS DIARIES – PART 36 – FRIENDS & LOVERS

Title: The Gus Diaries – Part 36 – Friends & Lovers
Written By: [livejournal.com profile] shadownyc
Timeline: About 9 years post-513
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Some angst
Summary: The further adventures of Gus in his teens after he moves in with Brian and Justin and proceeds through high school.
Dedication: To [livejournal.com profile] jans_intentions, [livejournal.com profile] stephmck, [livejournal.com profile] oasis6028 and [livejournal.com profile] starlightbj for being special friends and covering community responsibilities while I'm away.


Banner by the fabulous [livejournal.com profile] furriboots


[Previous installments can all be found in my “Memories” on my Profile Page]


Friends & Lovers

As we entered the final week of regular classes, Jeff and I seemed to spend more and more time with our friends. A lot of them would be going to away for the summer; some with their families, some with the parent they don’t live with (like I did when I was in Canada all those fucking wasted years – yes, I’m still angry at my mothers) and some to work at camps as counselors.

I hadn’t spoken to my mothers for over a week and they’d given up on calling. If they didn’t respect me, at least they respected MJ’s threats about getting me a new phone number. I miss them, but not nearly as much as I can’t stand the thought of talking with them.

Anyway, last Friday night Jeff and I planned to go out with Matt and his girlfriend and another two couples. It’s kind of cool thinking of myself as part of a couple. Sometimes I think that I’ll just fall apart if Jeff and I ever break up, but since there’s no sign of that now I’m not worried.

When we met the gang at the movies to see some Brett Keller film (that guy makes the shittiest films, but no one hears you if you start talking because of all the explosions), we discovered that there were more people coming than we realized.

Matt and Jessica were there and so were two other guys from the team and their dates but there was also a couple I’d never met before. Jessica immediately took up the introductions. It seems that her brother, Mark, who’s nineteen, is gay and his boyfriend Rick is seventeen and finishing his junior year at Allegheny High.

At first I thought it was kind of cool to actually have more than one gay couple in our group until we went out for a junk food binge after the movie. Watching Brett Keller blow up half the continent makes me hungry. We ended up at two adjoining tables with our end becoming the “gay” end of the table. I was beginning to feel uncomfortable about my age and I hadn’t felt that way around Jeff in a long time.

We all ordered and then our end of the table got quiet while the hetero end started talking about all the bullshit special effects in the movie while the girls kept saying how gross all the blood was – talk about stereotypes. They were the poster children for teen hetero dating.

Finally Mark spoke up, “So Jeff, my sister tells me you’re some kind of star athlete in school.”

Jeff started to blush slightly so I chimed in, “He’s the best basketball player on the team and was awarded athlete of the year by the school.”

“What about you? You look kind of young to be on a varsity team. Are you some kind of prodigy?”

“Hardly, but I’m tall and can handle a basketball well.”

“I bet you can handle balls well. What do you say Jeff?” Mark smirked. Did he think I didn’t get his fucking lousy joke?

“Gus is an amazing basketball player and he’s a better boyfriend than anyone I can imagine. As far as holding balls, that’s our business.” Jeff really is amazing.

“Hey, don’t get me wrong, All-star, but the best thing about being gay is that you can have a boyfriend and still play on the sidelines.”

Rick finally opened his mouth, “Yeah, Mark says that being gay gives us the right to trick when we want and still have a relationship. Girls just don’t understand.”

I wasn’t sure I understood either. I know that I’ve heard a lot about both my dads’ behavior over the years, but I never really listened all that closely. Maybe it was time to think about all this shit before I said something that I didn’t mean OR did something I didn’t want.

Jeff surprised me by answering Rick, “You know, Ricky, you and I are the same age. I had a boyfriend a lot like Mark last year. He was older and I thought whatever he said was THE word. Then he started taking me to gay bars. He got me a fake ID and because I was tall, and hot (he winked at me), no one ever challenged it.”

“So you understand what Mark’s saying.”

“I understand alright. I understand that my former boyfriend wanted to have me in his bed on demand and anyone else he wanted when they made themselves available. He wanted to use me to attract even more tricks so I’d end up getting fucked in more ways than one. I’m fucking clear on this, Ricky.” Then he turned to Mark, “Do you have anything to add or challenge in my statement?”

“Hey Mr. Basketball Star, if you want to live the boring life, go right ahead. But getting and giving head is a pleasure I want to experience in a variety of ways. I don’t just want vanilla in my life.”

“Sorry to hear that Mr. College Man. But you see, I get every flavor because not only do I have a fucking fabulous person in Gus, but he’s hotter, and a shitload more creative, than anything or anyone I’ve ever scene in one of those bars. He can keep me on the edge for an entire night if he wants to.” Then Jeff smirked and winked at me, “But then I’d miss the ultimate bliss of having us both have orgasms -- what, six or seven times in any given night. Is that about right Gus?”

I was so taken by Jeff’s defense of our relationship and his demonstration of what it meant to him that I almost missed my cue. “Oh, oh yeah, six or seven – at least.”

“Shit, you can’t be serious. This youngster can do that? You’re a fucking liar.” Mark seemed a bit shocked.

Then I chimed in, “Well, we do have help.”

“See, I knew it.”

“I have a very well-stocked toy box too, that let’s say keeps us entertained.” Just to add an extra dig, “One of my dads helped me pick out my collection.”

“One of your dads?”

“Oh yeah, my dads are Justin Taylor…”

“The artist? We learned about him in modern art class this year,”

“Yeah Rick, that Justin Taylor, and my other dad – the one I get my DNA from is Brian Kinney.”

Now Mark was really paying attention, “The Brian Kinney who owns Babylon…and isn’t that the Justin Taylor who was the youngest King of Babylon?”

“That’s them.” I smiled and decided that silence was my best weapon now.

“Are you sure you guys don’t want to set up…let’s say, a play date?” Mark was practically salivating and I was pretty fucking close to laughing my head off.

Jeff coyly smiled at both of them, “While the offer is certainly enticing, you’ll have to understand that there’s a good reason why I don’t share.”

“To the victor go the fucking spoils.” Mark practically grunted.

I smirked, “Literally.”

“You’re okay kid, for such a youngster.” Mark turned to Jeff, “And you’re one lucky fucker.”

Jeff smiled and took my hand and kissed it, “You have no idea how lucky.” I ducked my head so no one would see me blush.

All of sudden Jessica came around to our side of the table and stood between me and Rick, “So are you boys all getting along well?”

I looked up at her, “Swimmingly.” Then I turned to Jeff, “My dad is going to be picking us up soon to go to Britin.”

“What’s Britin?”

Jeff took this one, “Well Rick, that’s Gus’ fathers’ estate.” Then looked at Rick and Mark pointedly, “Later boys, we have a long, long (he stretched out the word) night ahead of us, and I need to preserve my energy.”

With that we rose and said our goodbyes to all our friends and headed outside to wait for dad to come by. As we left we heard Mark say, “Well fuck me.”

Jeff smirked, “He wishes.”

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

The ride home was pretty uneventful. Dad brought MJ along for company. Something tells me MJ enjoys quiet times like that with Dad. No interruptions since it’s almost midnight and they can talk without my prying ears looming in the background. It made me think a bit, as did the whole evening.

Before settling down in my room I told Jeff I needed to ask my dads something. I knocked on their door, hoping they weren’t already having their ‘private time’.

“Come in Sonny Boy.”

I pushed the door opened and saw Dad sitting in bed, reading a book, “How did you know it was me?”

“Who else would be knocking? Jeff doesn’t come to our room, and if it was an emergency my guess is he wouldn’t be quite so formal.”

“Right.”

“Okay, Gus, something’s on your mind. What’s got you all tongue-tied?”

“I was just wondering…” MJ walked out of the bathroom at that point with a towel around his waist and wet hair. “Nothing, I’ll leave you two alone.”

“Gus, what’s going on? Is something wrong?” MJ has this tone of voice that always draws me in. I can’t help but look at him and answer.

“It’s about privacy.”

“You don’t think you have enough privacy!” Dad sat up.

“Brian, shhh, I don’t think that’s what he means. Go on.”

“Thanks MJ. Dad, you and MJ give me plenty of privacy. But what about you?”

“What about us?” I could tell Dad was getting impatient with me.

“Okay, here goes. Do you and MJ get enough time alone with me living here now? I mean, I used to live here only in the summer, but now it’s all year round and I, I, I…”

“Yes, Gus…” MJ had the nerve to smile.

“I don’t want to fuck up your alone time. You know what I mean, don’t you?”

Dad laughed and MJ smiled. “Sonny Boy, far be it from me to NOT be concerned about getting enough time alone with Justin, but believe it or not, we find ways. You do realize you’re not with us twenty-four, seven.”

“Yeah but…”

“No buts about it. Think of what you do when Sunshine and I go out or after we all truly settle in for the night.” I nodded my head and then started smiling when I thought of all the times Jeff and I had stayed at Britin while my dads went out. Then I suddenly realized exactly what he was saying.

“Ewww, gross! I so didn’t want that image in my head.”

“Well then Sonny Boy, I suggest you check in with Jeff and see what he can do about augmenting that image. In the meantime, unless you want to witness how Justin and I enjoy our after hours alone time, you’ll leave and not return unless the house is on fire.”

The two of them had the nerve to laugh and as I left the room, right before closing the door I heard Dad say, in a very sexy voice that I wasn’t used to, “Now what could possibly be hidden under that towel Sunshine. I think we’d better investigate – thoroughly.” Gross!

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

When I returned to my room I opened the door and saw Jeff lying naked on the bed. There was a wicked smirk on his face and he was rolling my butt plug in his hands. He looked so fucking hot.

“It’s about time you came back Newbie, I’ve been waiting.”

I locked my door, stripped off my clothing in record time and practically pounced on my bed. Jeff immediately flipped me onto my back and he began to run the plug up and down my chest and side. Just the thought of its next stop made me shiver.

Jeff reached over and grabbed the lube and rubbed some on his fingers. As he kissed me all around my neck, cheeks and lips he began to circle my hole. I’m sure I must have moaned; he may have to. Just as I felt one finger start to breach the entrance, Jeff began to suck on my adam’s apple. I arched back a little and then his finger slid in. He soon added one more to add to the stimulation and I was in heaven.

He wiggled his fingers inside my channel and when he found my prostate he gently nudged it. Oh god, that felt so incredible. Everything was tingling.

He soon began sucking on my nipples and removed his fingers. I’m sure I sighed with displeasure but his fingers were soon replaced by the plug. I gripped Jeff so tightly that I left marks on his back and shoulders.

He slowly pushed the plug in and then started to turn it and nudge it until WHAM! It hit my prostate and it was like a bolt of pleasure went right through me. Jeff continued to nudge the plug in rhythm with himself as he started to rut against my thigh. He kept kissing me and pulling me tighter the whole time and all my senses were on overload.

Finally, with one last nudge I started to shoot, yelling, “Oh fuck!”

Then I felt Jeff follow almost immediately and our cum mixed on my stomach and chest.

Jeff slowly pulled the plug out and I was a bit let down by the loss and felt the need to hold him close. He dropped the plug off the bed and brought me into his arms even tighter.

As we both finally began to relax he separated us slightly and put his fingers in our mixed cum. He brought them to his lips and licked. It was the hottest thing I could ever imagine seeing, and then he brought his fingers to my lips for a taste. It was incredible, because it was us.

We rested together for a while and then I went to the bathroom to get us a warm cloth to clean up with.

I lay in Jeff’s arms so happy, with one question looming and it had to be asked. “Jeff.”

“Yes, Gus.” I could tell he was drowsy and satisfied by the way he had his arm around me and was stroking my shoulder.

“Do you think they’re right?”

“Who?”

“Mark and Rick – do you think we’ll need to invite other people into our relationship to spice it up from time to time?”

Jeff rolled on his side and faced me. He started to stroke my cheek and hair gently. “How did you feel about what we just did?”

“I thought it was the most amazing thing ever.”

“And how do you feel when we use the dildo or the cuffs?”

“That’s not fair; you’re starting to get me hard again.”

“That’s my point. If we can just get hard talking about what we do together and we haven’t even fully fucked yet, how can we possibly add any more spice than we already have?”

“I love you Jeff. You always know just the right thing to say.” We kissed briefly after that. “Imagine how hot our sex life will be once my dad lets us into Babylon. Just the thought of watching all those hot guys staring at us while we dance and touch is…”

After that we were both lost. We were so fucking hard just from talking about sex with each other it was incredible. I started to suck Jeff’s cock. It’s so beautiful and long, but after a while he stopped me. He straddled my legs, lining up our cocks and began to stroke them together while he put on a show for me, pulling and rubbing his own nipples. I started to do the same.

I wanted to move more but with him sitting on my legs it was impossible and it made it all the hotter. Soon I found myself calling out his name as he did mine when we both shot together.

Jeff got off me and neither of us bothered cleaning up this time. He lay on his side and held me, whispering, “Does it seem like we need to add to our sex life?”

“No fucking way.” I was nearly asleep and felt Jeff pull the top sheet and blanket up over us.

Then he began to stroke my hair and I heard him murmur in my ear, “I love you Gus, don’t ever forget that. No matter where we ever go, or who we may meet, I love you.”

“Me too, Jeff.”

And that was the last thing I remember before falling asleep.

It’s good to know that no matter what and no matter the temptation, I have Jeff nearby to take care of me and steer me in the right direction. He’s amazing…and I bet his dick up my ass will be unbelievable…but not yet.



The next installment will by up in two weeks as I'll be away on a family vacation.
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Gus' Diaries

Date: 2008-05-21 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabina1956.livejournal.com
I continued to be enthralled and totally immersed in the world you've created. Your original characters and 'our boys' are rich and full of life.
Not sure if I wait the two weeks but I'll try.
Thank you for this series.

Sabina

Re: Gus' Diaries

Date: 2008-05-21 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

It's such a pleasure to envision "our boys" with their family and friends. It's actually become a personal extension of the show that I didn't expect it would become.

*HUGS*

Date: 2008-05-21 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] llvoncan.livejournal.com
You know, I'm with Gus. I'm totally waiting for "what comes next..." I cannot imagine how intercourse is going to be for these two when they finally manage to come together. Very nicely done with the other couple.

Date: 2008-05-21 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
I'm glad you understand Gus' point. He's in no hurry (and neither is Jeff) because they're both happy with their sex life, and more important, with each other.

I'm glad you liked the interaction with the other couple. I've been wanting to do something like this with the boys for a little while now. :D

Date: 2008-05-21 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] furriboots.livejournal.com
Oh another wonderful chapter in Gus's life. I so love this story.

I am glad to see that Jeff is aware of what he has and is able to convince Gus that they are not missing anything by not taking Mark up his offer.

I giggled madly reading Gus's reaction of Brian's hints about Justin and his sex life. So typical for a teenager to be grossed out by the thought of his parents (whatever sex they are) having sex. I am sure that Brian's last comment to Justin was deliberately timed to evoke such a reaction from Gus. I am sure it amused Brian immensely to realize he was making Gus squirm.

Lovely last scene with Jeff. These boys are just too hot together!

Have a great holiday. I am going to miss you but I will be waiting eagerly to hear about your trip (and for the next instalment of the Gus Diaries!)

Date: 2008-05-21 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you!!! You always make me feel so good about this story. :D

One of the reasons I love Jeff is he's had experience both in a relationship and in an open relationship. He knows what's out there and he's making an informed choice with Gus.

Gus was definitely channeling interactions I've had with my daughter during his chat with Brian and Justin. LOL

When Gus and Jeff are together they definitely can heat things up!!!!

Thank you for the holiday wishes.

Date: 2008-05-21 02:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akintay.livejournal.com
The way Jeff handled that Mark guy is one of the reasons I like him so much - Gus definitely has a great taste in guys :)

Wonderful update, with just the right amount of humor. Loved it!

And have on your vacation :)

*hugs*

Date: 2008-05-21 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
I love Jeff. He's had experiences before so he knows what he wants in a relationship. Gus definitely has great taste and instincts.

I'm glad you liked the bits of fun in this chapter. It was time to lighten the mood.

*hugs back*

Date: 2008-05-21 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herefordroad.livejournal.com
i was wondering if...and hoping that you would post before vacation, so glad you did!

the first part of this chapter makes me smile with the description of the group, mark and his comments, and then the ultimate...jeff's defense and subtle put down of mark:

“You know, Ricky, you and I are the same age. I had a boyfriend a lot like Mark last year. He was older and I thought whatever he said was THE word. Then he started taking me to gay bars. He got me a fake ID and because I was tall, and hot (he winked at me), no one ever challenged it.”

..."I understand that my former boyfriend wanted to have me in his bed on demand and anyone else he wanted when they made themselves available. He wanted to use me to attract even more tricks so I’d end up getting fucked in more ways than one. I’m fucking clear on this, Ricky.” Then he turned to Mark, “Do you have anything to add or challenge in my statement?”

and then came part two...a very hot gus and jeff exploring love in more ways than one. and jeff is a terrific, supportive boyfriend:

"If we can just get hard talking about what we do together and we haven’t even fully fucked yet, how can we possibly add any more spice than we already have?”

jeannie



Date: 2008-05-21 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
I love the character of Jeff. He's THE boyfriend everyone wants, but has experienced enough in his life that he's not perfect, just incredibly aware.

The way he lets Gus know things is through actions first and then words, if they're needed. He reminds me a lot of someone we all know...and drool over. ;)

I actually had this written a week ago and couldn't wait to post it. LOL

*Hugs*

Date: 2008-05-21 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjmpets.livejournal.com
an amazing chapter.

mark sounded like a younger brian. and rick was just going along for the ride. loved how jeff put them in their places. besides showing mark and rick how happy they are together and that their sex life keeps them satisfied, i guess it doesn't hurt to have the true royal couple of liberty ave. as your boyfriend's parents.

gus is so cute when he has to talk about things with brian.

jeff is a wonder and i truly hope that once he graduates he and gus will still be together. they certainly have an exciting sex life and that's with out actually having sex. i'd say this one is a keeper.

have a great vacation.

Date: 2008-05-21 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you!!!

Mark was similar to a less mature Brian who didn't understand the needs and feelings of those he professed to care about, especially when it had to do with sex.

Jeff's comebacks were fun and from an informed place of reference and Gus finally understood how to deal with Mark.

Gus' talk with Brian made me laugh because it's a conversation I'm quite familiar with.

Jeff is definitely a keeper!

Thank you for the vacation wishes. :D

Date: 2008-05-21 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lollies-b4j4b.livejournal.com
Brilliant chapter, Im glad Jeff stood up to Mark, like with Gus being younger and so in love with Jeff he could perhaps be swayed into things he doesnt really want to do so Im so happy that Jeff is so nice and a great person, I look forward to the next chapter.

Date: 2008-05-21 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Jeff, having experienced a boyfriend like Mark, knows exactly how to handle the situation AND he knows who, and what, he wants.

Date: 2008-05-21 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camjakefan.livejournal.com
Everytime I see this story it makes my day. I love Jeff he is the perfect blend of masculinity and sensitivity. I love that he and Gus are always there for each other and he knows what to say to Gus. What can I say? I love Gus he is so sensitive to other people's feelings. Another great job. Hope you enjoy your vacation.

Date: 2008-05-21 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
That's such a huge compliment, thank you!

Jeff's had enough experience with his previous boyfriend to see how "open" relationships work and it didn't work for him. He really is just right for Gus.

Gus is the untainted versions of a combination of Brian and Justin. The best of both worlds.

Thank you for the vacation wishes. :D

Date: 2008-05-21 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitasangel.livejournal.com
Way to go Jeff. I love how he and Gus handled the situation with the other couple. How sweet of Gus to think of his Dads and how typical Brian to say they always find the time.

Have a great vacation.
Lyn

Date: 2008-05-21 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Jeff definitely knows how to handle himself with the "Marks" of the world. He and Gus really do work well together.

Gus' chat with Brian and Brian's reactions amused me as I imagined the scene playing out. :D

I'm truly looking forward to this vacation. Thank you.

Date: 2008-05-21 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jans-intentions.livejournal.com
I really love this story. I may have to reread bits of it while you are away.

Date: 2008-05-21 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you. You're so supportive of this fic, I truly appreciate it!

There are certain fics I reread when I need to visit my "happy place". One of those is Painting Lessons.

Date: 2008-05-21 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kari77.livejournal.com
Aww, Gus and Jeff together-time is always a pleasure to read. Love that Jeff stood up against the other guy, talking about the consequences from his former relationship.

Hehehe, and no way would Brian allow not to have enough time alone with Justin. It was cute, though, that Gus was worried about that.

Hope you'll have a lovely vacation with your family. :-)

Date: 2008-05-21 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love Gus & Jeff "together-time" too. :D

Jeff really is a great boyfriend and he's not afraid to stand up for himself and Gus.

Gus is such a teenager. No matter what he really knows, he didn't think his dads had enough private time. Now he knows way more than he intended. LOL

Thank you for the lovely vacation wishes.

Date: 2008-05-21 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucsmom.livejournal.com
This was another wonderful chapter. Jeff is so smart and I loved when he stood up to that guy. Gus is lucky to have him and vice versa.

Kim

Date: 2008-05-21 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Jeff is terrific, and because of his past experience he truly appreciates Gus.

Date: 2008-05-21 08:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluemchenkaffee.livejournal.com
I loved how Jeff handled the situation with Mark and Rick.
The J/G sex scene was hot and sweet at the same time.

Enjoy your vacation.
Susanne

Date: 2008-05-21 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Jeff really made his point and demonstrated his love for Gus. He's not only good at talking but his actions speak even louder.

Thank you for your holiday well-wishes! :D

Date: 2008-05-21 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] locaporgale-01.livejournal.com
What a great chapter,these two really know how to keep their sex life very spicy,I just love Jeff and Gus' relationship.

It’s good to know that no matter what and no matter the temptation, I have Jeff nearby to take care of me and steer me in the right direction. He’s amazing…and I bet his dick up my ass will be unbelievable…but not yet.
Is it me or these two are about to actually fuck???? and is it possible that Gus,eventually,of course wanted to fuck around??I mean,"like father like son....

Have a fantastic time with family,enjoy it, and see ya♥

Date: 2008-05-22 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Jeff and Gus are a very special couple. Gus is getting closer to the point that he wants to give more to Jeff, but he knows he's not ready yet.

I hope to have a wonderful holiday. :D

Date: 2008-05-21 11:45 pm (UTC)
ext_56399: (Bailarina)
From: [identity profile] plasticine-star.livejournal.com
The legend of Brian Kinney and Justin Taylor reaches the teen set lol. I'm sure Justin would be honored to know that he's no only a great artist but that he's still remembered as he youngest King of Babylon ;)

Have a great time on vacation!

Date: 2008-05-22 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Yes, Brian and Justin are both legends in their own time and the idols of the gay teen set.

I'm sure Justin would like to know his striptease is more than just ancient urban legend. LOL

Thank you for the great feedback and vacation wishes. :D

Date: 2008-05-22 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickiebg.livejournal.com
I loved hearing the banter between the boys and listening to Jeff brag about Gus in his own special way was very heart warming. He's the perfect boyfriend...

Thanks for sharing this chapter before your trip. I hope you have a great time with the family!
xoxo,
M

Date: 2008-05-22 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
I've been waiting to post something about Jeff & Gus interacting with another gay couple. Jeff's previous experience helped to foster the banter and I love when Gus is able to join in.

Jeff is fabulous!

I can't believe we're finally leaving soon. Thank you for the well-wishes. ♥

Date: 2008-05-22 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luv-dox.livejournal.com
I'm continually impressed with the maturity Gus and Jeff keep showing. It's nice to see how much Jeff values his relationship with Gus and how open Gus is to trusting him. Fortunately for both of them, Gus has the solid foundation of his relationship with both his Dad's to start out with. Great chapter!

Have a fun vacation.

Hugs,

Tandy

Date: 2008-05-22 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Jeff learned a lot from his previous boyfriend. He knows what is and isn't valuable in a relationship. Gus' maturity is as a result of his two terrific dads.

Thank you for the vacation wishes! *Hugs back*

Date: 2008-05-22 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bodleian.livejournal.com
Isn't it incredible that kids are always grossed out by the idea of their parents having sex. When a school friend of mine realised that her mother wasn't a virgin she refused to talk to her for 3 weeks.
Have fun on your vacation and I look forward to when you return.

Date: 2008-05-22 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Having had similar experiences with my daughter, Gus' reaction doesn't surprise me and I loved picturing this scene between fathers and son.

Thank you for the lovely vacation wish. :D

Date: 2008-05-22 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sfscarlet.livejournal.com
Gus asking if his parents have enough alone time- priceless- Brian telling Justin in a sexy voice- "let's see what you have under that towel"- priceless- Gus and Jeff experimenting with sex toys- priceless- but the way Jeff defended Gus and his relationship- wonderful

I love these characters- hope you never get tired of telling Gus's story.

Date: 2008-05-22 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
*SQUEES* Your feedback has put such a smile on my face. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I've been waiting on this type of a scenario for a while.

I love Gus & Jeff together, too!

Gus is still very much "in" my mind. :D

Date: 2008-05-22 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rentmerentme.livejournal.com
Thanks fop the chapter before you go away. Have fun and relax!! I am very glad that I checked my FP before bed tonight. If this were a traditional book I would not be able to put it down.

B

Date: 2008-05-22 10:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
I'm so glad that you're enjoying this series so much!

Thank you for the vacation well-wishes. :D

Date: 2008-05-22 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msv713.livejournal.com
The chapter was wonderful. Loved Jeff's responses - what a great guy for Gus. I'm wondering though, things are going so well between them, I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop - of course maybe (hopefully) that's just my own issues.....Have a great vacation.

Date: 2008-05-22 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Jeff is definitely a great combination of just the right words combined with just the right actions. He's also learned from experience.

I really like Jeff, so he'll be around for a while.

Thank you for the vacation wishes! :D

Date: 2008-05-23 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girloftheburbs.livejournal.com
Incredible as always! I just love Gus and Jeff!! So hilarious about Gus' eavesdropping, LOL! Have a wonderful trip, and I'll try to be patient waiting for the next chapter. ;) *Hugs*

Date: 2008-05-23 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your incredible comment!

Gus and Jeff are a wonderful couple. Gus really can be cute and definitely shows us his "kid side" every once in a while. :D

We leave for our trip in just about 9 hours, I'm really looking forward to it. *Hugs back*

Date: 2008-05-23 08:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roseguel.livejournal.com
jeff and gus are sooo sweet... two weeks without your updates??? oh dear... this is way to long... enjoy your vacation ;-)) rose

Date: 2008-05-23 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
I really like Jeff and Gus. They're a great couple.

Thank you, I'll enjoy my holiday and write while I'm away. :D

Date: 2008-05-23 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tdorian.livejournal.com
very nice chapter ! i liked it focused on Jeff and Gus.They alreafy have such a mature relationship.Jeff's last comments left an odd taste...Like he sees the end of it.Not the end of the love but of "them" as a couple like they are now.Aida

Date: 2008-05-28 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

No worries. Jeff is just more mature than Gus and was burned once.

(I'm not an opera fan. LOL)

Date: 2008-05-23 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] niggel77.livejournal.com
Much appreciated

Date: 2008-05-28 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it.
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